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[Antonio Trivelin]

strawberries ??

And what do you thing about this photo ? :)

I love food photographs and i´m trying...

http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/117/dsc6540fixbshp72dpiassincopy1b.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

All coments are welcome :D

Best regards,

Antonio

[jliechty]

I wish that the closest strawberries, which happen to be the brightest ones that draw attention, could be in better focus. Using a smaller aperture would bring more of the berries into focus. Otherwise, I really like the photo. Good job! :cool:

[El Hacko]

I agree with Jliechty...Colorful photo Antoine but less bokeh and focus for all the berries in this one make it a winner. Got to say, the lighting and colors look great!

[Kevin Sadler]

oi antonio, tudo bem? brasil vs. croatia hoje... muito facil para os brasileiros :)

a couple of comments. i agree with el hacko and jliechty that the front strawberry should be the one in focus. the ones that are in focus are not special and you can't see the entire berry so there is no compelling reason to focus on them. at least the one in the front is whole and big.

you might also want to 'soften' the light and eliminate the hot spots (overexposed) that are on the fruit. there should be more pretty color where you see white. you can use bounce flash or a diffuser to accomplish this and still get the bright look.

adding more attractive texture to the strawberries might be accomplished with some water droplets, especially on the leaves which look kind of dry.

food photography is one of the hardest disciplines but you're doing a great job.

e eu gosto da fruta do seu pais!!!

kevin

[Antonio Trivelin]

jliechty, El Hacko and Kevin Tks a lots for the tips !!!!!

Kevin, Brazil disappointed all brazilians in this first game. I hope they could be better at the next one. Seu português está ótimo Kevin !!! Parabéns meu amigo !!!