Helena

[aquariusbg011]

Hello, people.
Long time no seen, again ..
Now, this is my new artwork .. give a comment ..

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/5623/elena11br1.jpg

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/5116/elena22eh2.jpg

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8567/elena33pg0.jpg

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/9062/elena44vp4.jpg

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/221/elena55kt5.jpg

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Greetings from Belgrade

[nhfirefighter13]

Here are some quick (very quick) critiques that are hopefully constructive:

1. Holy blue color-cast Batman! Intentional and if so, why? IMO, it doesn't add anything to the composition, rather, hinders it.

2. I like everything except her eyes. The whites of her eyes are too white, almost like you took the eraser tool to them in photoshop. Freaky looking.

3. Not bad. I'm not quite sure if I like the background or not though.

4. Pretty girl. Nice smile.

5. My only nitpick is the little white object in the background above her left ear as it keeps drawing my eyes off of her face. A little cloning in PS would take care of that.

Overall, nice job. Keep it up!