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swartzphotography
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Registered: November 2004
Location: Oklahoma city
Posts: 1,131
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Sun September 23, 2007 11:30pm
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i think this one works the best of the three you posted littlephotographer one minor thing is that her hands seem to lead out of the picture although we know there being used to hold her self up it usually causes a little distraction. So that being said i would try to have her either put her arms somewhere in the frame or step back and try to include them of course the first suggestion being the more preferable. but that all being said what i like about this one is she is engaging the camera when i first started i learned for me that they are so much more compelling portraits when the subject is looking right at the lens.
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- board er ing on spectacular
- Mark Swartz
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cox
Wildlife Photographer
Registered: July 2004
Location: SF Bay Area
Posts: 1,636
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Mon September 24, 2007 12:07am
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Yup, the eye contact here makes the shot. I agree with not cutting off her arms, but the pose, the tilt of her head and direct eye contact, is very compelling.
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--Michael
Nature, RAW in tooth and claw!
www.elementalphoto.net
michael.cox@elementalphoto.net
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littlephotographer
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Registered: July 2005
Posts: 7
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Mon September 24, 2007 11:20am
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Thanks for the tips! I see now how distracting cutting off her arms is...next time I'll keep that in mind!
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