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NikNikon
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Registered: June 2004
Location: Midwest/USA
Posts: 1,635
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Sun April 6, 2008 11:47pm
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I like the idea of this one Jeff. I'm on the fence about the coat & hood. The only other thing that catches my eye is your alien bee over exposed the detail of the fire place top right. Otherwise nice work.
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Jeffphoto
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Registered: April 2006
Posts: 344
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Thanks, Nick. As I exposed it in camera the upper right corner is not blown out, nowhere near it. I wanted to get experimental in the post processing, so I cranked up the exposure intentionally thinking "they'll get the point, it's a nice fireplace." I didn't really want a picture of the woodwork anyway. Also, with my usual white / matted frame that I put around these things I figured that the fireplace detail would be too redundant.
So my experiment was to try to cool off the scene but keep her face and upper body warm. Hopefully with her in front of the gas logs it would have a "warm welcome in a cold world" kind of invitation to it.
Light set up was the one softbox at top right.
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jpreston
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Registered: December 2004
Location: Marysville, Ohio
Posts: 731
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First thing I think when looking at this image is that it is way too cool.
Second, this angle makes her look like she has a 'pig' nose.
Third, a 1.5million dollar home should have a more realistic fireplace;-}.
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www.classicedgephoto.com
"A government big enough to give you everything you want is big enough to take away everything you have." Thomas Jefferson
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Freddy
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Registered: July 2004
Location: Munich / Germany
Posts: 16
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I don´t like the "cool" style. I would try to get a warmer scene --a cute girl and a fireplace should be warm --imho :-)
maybe the next time look out for her position-move her a little more in the middle, so you can crop the right side --withe the window part.
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Jeffphoto
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Registered: April 2006
Posts: 344
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FREDDY!
I haven't seen you here for a while, and it really pleases me to get your feedback! Thank you for the comments, I do value your opinion.
I am meeting with the model in two days (Friday) to discuss these photos. Thank you for your comments!
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NikNikon
photoshopgrapher
Registered: June 2004
Location: Midwest/USA
Posts: 1,635
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Wed April 9, 2008 10:53pm
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Hey Jeff, I'm guessing we have a new Freddy (new members and 8 posts). 
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Jeffphoto
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Registered: April 2006
Posts: 344
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Thu April 10, 2008 6:20am
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Oh, yeah. Thanks, Nick. And he's in Munich instead of Costa Rica.
Well, Freddy, please excuse me for mistaking you for our old friend. But I do still thank you for the comments on the photos and I hope that you'll be with us for a while and keep critiquing. I'm glad for the input.
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Freddy
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Registered: July 2004
Location: Munich / Germany
Posts: 16
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Fri April 11, 2008 9:27am
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Hey Jeff
no problem
I hope my suggestion/opinion is still worth it :-)
I´ve been her since 3 years ---but no really active the last 2,5years :-)
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